Feedback from Matt and Rachel
Matt and Rachel overall, seem to like my treatment to the Changelings tale, this is what they said :
Matt thought that the story had logical causality as a story, but from a filming perspective it needed to link up. This was understandable, as whist creating my treatment i was unsure, if it had to be in a film or story form and i chose a story form. Whilst researching i realised that most stories are just summaries and miss out the in between parts, therefore, when i said that 'as months past' it skipped out information that could develop story further.
Rachel said that the theme of neglect is good and that my plot points are well thought out although it does run very close to the original story. However, she voted for my idea to be apart of our main task final piece.
Matt thought that the story had logical causality as a story, but from a filming perspective it needed to link up. This was understandable, as whist creating my treatment i was unsure, if it had to be in a film or story form and i chose a story form. Whilst researching i realised that most stories are just summaries and miss out the in between parts, therefore, when i said that 'as months past' it skipped out information that could develop story further.
Rachel said that the theme of neglect is good and that my plot points are well thought out although it does run very close to the original story. However, she voted for my idea to be apart of our main task final piece.
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